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[VID] Introduction
Hello,

Since that I lost all of my material, I need to do a new introduction.

May I ask your opinion on it ?



(I'm not 100% sure it is the right place to post it, sorry for that...)

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

I think you should add some "borders" (idk how it's called) in the letters of "Mocucha"
Wich color do you see for that ? I had the same idea, and I am trying some king of red or red-white glowing.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

how would it look like if you add a thin black border?

Anyways, it's very great. But I think you should make "Mocucha" looks more visible, I loved everything else.
Also maybe adding any 3D effects (or other effects you could have in mind) to these letters would help as well.
Last edited by Lionet; Dec 12, 2017 at 06:24 PM.
you know, i kinda just nib nabbed your intro..
dont ask me how.
just here, take it here
believe me, its not a virus
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I did 3 new version :







Wich one do you prefer ?

Wow Haluejah ! Thanks. It is creepy but thanks x)

I am gonna still creating a new intro, i kept the previous one for a very long time.
Last edited by Mocucha; Dec 13, 2017 at 04:48 PM.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

I think glowing and colored glowing looks a bit blurred and I felt uncomfortable when I saw.

I'm still in favor of a dark border, and maybe a tiny bit thicker.
Originally Posted by Mocucha View Post

Personally, I still prefer this one. Looks clearer.
Which editor you're using?
Looks nice. Since you added movement in the background, I think it would be more complemented if you add movement to the letters as well, like zooming a bit in or out slowly. Also have you tried to add some more thickness to that outline of the letters? Maybe looks great too `c`