ES Recruitment Drive
I don't have time for anything but short edits

Some twitchy left arm and left leg movemwnt at start

I might further edit this into madman
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Attractive poop.rpl (97.7 KB, 12 views)
golf
Another replay
Kinda empty, but with a nice pose.

Would appreciate your feedback.
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Flawful (Ocherednoy Vyser).rpl (134.6 KB, 13 views)
golf
Flawful (Ocherednoy Vyser) :
like replay but at 2-nd kick i want to see decap instead not beatifull DM
something like that
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[SRG(edit)].rpl (107.4 KB, 8 views)
The opener looked kind of weird when you relaxed your right knee. The first kick looked great, good job! The next kick was fairly stiff though, try contracting the knee then extending it or something along those lines to make it look a little better. The pose was awesome. Great job. Overall 8.5/10
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
Appreciated

A replay here.
Booms, skeets, manips, everything needed.
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Happy Llama.rpl (329.3 KB, 14 views)
Last edited by AssassinPro; Jan 3, 2014 at 09:33 PM.
golf
Pretty nice, although your movement is a bit weird. It looked like you made abrupt movements every once in a while.
I really liked the manip for some reason though. The lift was pretty and surprisingly powerful.
The grab was eh, I'm not a fan of grabbing right after a manip unless it flows perfectly. It shows that you couldn't completely control Uke.
The next hit was really cool though. A boom with scattered dms is my thing.
The self dm hit was nice, but the transition to the last boom looked a bit abrupt, once again. I would try not to move all the joints at once. Instead, I would slowly start preparing the kick and then go for it. It was surprisingly destructive though.
oh yeah
Thanks pusga

Update here. Quick and messy but whatever.
Watch and tell me what you think in comments.
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Charlie and his wife.rpl (188.8 KB, 11 views)
Last edited by AssassinPro; Jan 3, 2014 at 09:33 PM.
golf
It was awesome for a -30 grav replay. You just seemed a little off balance after the third hit. The opener seemed a little... different. Try not to overextend your abs. Everything else was great. Overall, 8/10
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
Thank you guy, I appreciate it
Originally Posted by Irrita View Post
8.5/10

Originally Posted by Irrita View Post
8/10

Doesn't seem like I am improving
Well this one might be even worse. Practicing manipulations (is it?) :P

EDIT: I have a better version which I will upload tomorrow.
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Here it is

By the way: 1k views! yay!
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Just a scratch.rpl (148.2 KB, 8 views)
Oranges grow on trees.rpl (231.4 KB, 12 views)
Last edited by AssassinPro; Jan 6, 2014 at 01:08 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
golf
I didn't wait long enough so it didn't bump

I would love you guys to comment on the last replay. The one before that was kinda messy. So, bump.
golf