I'm just starting replay making and this was my best replay after 2 days.
Any tips or comments?

cool, both new to it, i'll try my best to get you better

good opener, but try and get a more advanced one, this one kinda looks like a shovel =v
very nice DMs, but after a few you paused for around 40 frames which I don't like, speed and momentum are key to a good replay
again, more good DMs after that
meh pose, and in general you need to be less stiff and relax more joints

gg tho

also, did you use keyframes at all? if so as soon as you grab somewhere or DM on the same frame as that, move your tori alot, it keeps the action going

Yeah, thanks! I was freezing a bit because I set the DMThres. to 70 because some of my hits don't DM. :3 I also made this

opener was better
good kick out to uke
nice swap of the legs to get that arm DM ;p
pose really could be better =/

again, really stiff, apart from where you swapped legs

gg, also if you have skype PM me your skype name so we can communicate there more easy and I could help you more easy

Skype: iburritoslayer

added, keep making those awesome replay for me to cnc ;p

Here's some I made yesterday, my first day.

#1 Replay
meh opener
good jump to uke
cool way to lift arm to get kick into position
the kick itself is good
better pose

#2 Replay
opener felt slow, but good none the less for your second ever replay
could of moved left arm to make you go faster, it was blocking your leg (extend left pec)
the decap was sick!
barely touched anything before hitting the head and almost went straight through le neck
stiff pose, but good, again, for 2nd ever replay ;p

#3 Replay
A big improvement of the opener, went straight into the action
great knee DM, aim a TINY bit lower next time maybe though?
awesome way to kick the chest, but if you edited enough you could of easily gotten a DP or Ab / Lumbar DM (both of which are awesome)
could of grabbed uke's head as your arm flew by, lowered it, do some other stuff for maybe a boom, but that's for when you improve more ;p
could of gotten a better pose

#4 Replay
nothing much in this replay, but i'll try my best to give tips
meh opener, don't try to noobclap imo
arm dm looked weird, but still worked and was nice
i agree with your leg, the other arm was hard to dm
random pose n stuff and the end which was meh

#5 Replay
again, good opener, straight into action
elbow DM was damn awesome, but try to DM it with your foot and not the knee (atleast it looks like you did it with your knee to me)
kinda looks like a wip, would like you to finish it

Conclusion:
In total, openers were good, and you aimed your DMs well. But, try getting more than just 1 DM for every replay, so try getting 2 or 3. Try to relax more stuff, like if you are extending a glute or ankle, try relaxing it, and see how that goes. It could really improve the flow and overall sexiness of the replay.

For help with further replay making, you can click some of these links and read as much as you want to see if they help.

http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=62999
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=18890


also get on skype and accept my request ;p