Toribash
Looks defenite man

smexy jump, diddnt like that u tuched with legs on barrier
nice jump over pole, epic 360 onto ledge
smexy jump uppwards and nice ending

8/10
Jun 2, 2023 - .best. day. ever.
That was awesome. I love football replays.
The header at the end just looked awkward.
I loved your aiming for kicks
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Thanks for the comments



my kinda first sword spar in sp

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[CT] [Obey] [Oshi]

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Nice replay. Felt like uke was acting like a punching bag in the start but he moved ok. Really good action throughout the replay but you have to work on reactions to hits and similar Had some creative attacks but they were all on the same tori. All in all it's a great work. Looking forward to moar.
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^^^^get some freaky jackie chan movement n stuff

anny ways, pretty nicely done and all man
tho try using atacks and blocks,dodges on both tori's
so one dos'nt become supirior

7/10
keep doing what your doing, ya got talent, now show it ^^
Jun 2, 2023 - .best. day. ever.
Originally Posted by xioi View Post
tho try using atacks and blocks,dodges on both tori's

^

The replay was nice but it looked messy and you lost your speed. Try to make the last hits with the swords.
I really liked how you kicked the sword out of Uke's hand.
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Hey.

The opener was nice but it's a bit generic so work on that.
Nice flow and your movement was great in the spins, and nice cork at the end.
The pose was fine.

Sorry for the crappy cnc, I don't know much about tricking ;P