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Old Nov 20, 2016   #1
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Adobe Illustrator & Draw Illustrations
Welcome to the thread. Cnc appreciated.

Adobe Draw (Iphone):
1st Time 


Wip&Finished 


Finished 


Finito 


Illustrator (pc)
OK 


medium 


big 


Bart Simpson 


STEAMPUNK OBAMA (BIG) 


Rihanna with wing 

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Old Nov 20, 2016   #2
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Hey that's not bad!

The only things I would say you should work on is making your lines smoother, and making your colors blend better.
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Old Nov 22, 2016   #3
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Updated OP, anyone with coloring tips please speak up
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Old Nov 22, 2016   #4
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The lining is pretty decent it gives you a unique style
your coloring and shading also give this feel off
but I fell when you colour you forget to finalize
certain lines and shades... Not saying to stop colouring
just pay attention to the piece as a full before finalizing.
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Old Nov 22, 2016   #5
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Updated the 3rd as finished, want to pose a question:
Should i do realistic backgrounds for my images?
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Old Nov 25, 2016   #6
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new wip
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Old Nov 25, 2016   #7
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Ay man these are really nice I would say work on making your lines smoother
and your lips actually almost connect at the ends.
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Old Nov 25, 2016   #8
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you should really work on the lips with the 4th pic

also you should start shading.
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Old Nov 26, 2016   #9
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tips on shading?
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Old Nov 26, 2016   #10
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I have too much to critique on the final results, but first, dont draw on your phone, you will never get a quality drawing on a small screen, believe me.
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