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Old Mar 17, 2017   #1
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Horror head
I've been working on this for two days, Its still super cartoony but I need ideas so if you have any tell me:
WIP!!!
http://imgur.com/BXOP1UH

CNC PLEASE


Program: SkEtChbOoK


list of things to fix:

(Junai): nose es too bag (Fixed in wip 2)
(Dare): More shading so the mouth actually looks like its inside the bigger mouth (Fixed in wip 2)
(Dare): Fix the back of the head stupid kiddo (WILL HAPPEN IN WIP 3)


WIP 2 IS HERE!

HERE 


THINGS TO DO FOR WIP 3:
(Dare): Fix the back of the head stupid kiddo
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Old Mar 17, 2017   #2
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I like it! But why is the nose so big?
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Old Mar 18, 2017   #3
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I love the idea of one mouth in another. But the outside on has to pop out more so that that the inside mouth actually looks inside the big mouth. And maybe add stuff to the back of head. this head is really cool!
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Old Mar 18, 2017   #4
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Great head. Just one thing that's pissing me off about it. The right ear. You should make it so that it's proportional to the left one. Other than that keep us updated with the head because it's fantastic so far.
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Old Mar 19, 2017   #5
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WIP 2:

HERES THE IMG 


CNC PLS!
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Old Mar 19, 2017   #6
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THE HEAD LOOKS AWESOME! But add something to the back if the head, don't leave it plain! Idk maybe add another eyeball with cracks going out from it. Idk

But I love the look of this head
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Old Mar 19, 2017   #7
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Loving the head veoo. The tongue seems out of place, though. And you should really add something to the back of the head like Dare suggested. Other than that, you're doing a fantastic job.
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Old Mar 19, 2017   #8
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Originally Posted by Soul View Post
Loving the head veoo. The tongue seems out of place, though. And you should really add something to the back of the head like Dare suggested. Other than that, you're doing a fantastic job.

thanks, I'm glad u like it <#,3,<#<<#,,3,3,,<#<<3

:3

YEAH IK THE TONGUE LOOKS FUKING WEIRD THO D:

If any of you guys have suggestions, I really want to have something coming out of the mouth or something, here are some of my own ideas (you can just say you like one if you want):

Idea 1: arms/legs trying to get out of him fucking chewing the shit outta those kiddos
Idea 2: A thinner longer tongue thats not symmetrical
Idea 3: REMOVE the fucking tongue veoo >: (

IDK

ILL REMOVE FOR NOW THOUGH
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Old Mar 19, 2017   #9
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Try the arm or leg thing instead of tongue ( or do an asymmetrical tongue instead of a symmetrical tongue, or just get rid of it. Choose the one which makes the head looks better in your opinion ). Also in the wip pics the left side of the head has cracks on the side of the head which looks awesome but on the other side of the head it looks plain.
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Old Mar 19, 2017   #10
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Originally Posted by Dare View Post
Try the arm or leg thing instead of tongue ( or do an asymmetrical tongue instead of a symmetrical tongue, or just get rid of it. Choose the one which makes the head looks better in your opinion ). Also in the wip pics the left side of the head has cracks on the side of the head which looks awesome but on the other side of the head it looks plain.

I Fixed most of this in WIP 3!!!

Its on my tori RN if you wanna DL ME : )

Thanks for the CNC
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