Toribash
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cnc please
need tips what i can do better
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nurin123 9 or more.rpl (182.1 KB, 13 views)
nurin123 sons of stone.rpl (84.7 KB, 20 views)
nurin123 strange.rpl (181.7 KB, 15 views)
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Guess I'll go first. I"m not the best At Cnc but here it goes.

9 or more: I like the boomhits and the destruction! Near the end you were jittery like you were unsure what to do. I also reccomend not to launch with your hand like that. It makes the realism go away.

sons of stone: Well it was pretty short, but I liked the boomhit and nice transition over to a pose.

Strange: The madman itself was good but you seemed a bit stiff at points. Don't know if you rushed a bit or it was not noticed but it could of been more fluid and smooth

Overall 8.5/10
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new replay
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nurin123 elysium 2.rpl (77.1 KB, 7 views)
nurin123 klassik.rpl (126.1 KB, 8 views)
Last edited by Zoey; Dec 21, 2014 at 12:12 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Here goes

''Klassik''
A little bit odd DMS, try to stay away from weird movements
You used quite alot of time to get in a pose, but it's okay i guess
6/10, fix the pose thing and i'll do 7 or 8

''Elysium 2''
Try varying your movement more, doing different flips than the same, and then try to stick to getting more momentum.
New replays
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nurin123 def.rpl (58.1 KB, 6 views)
nurin123 lonly.rpl (52.2 KB, 5 views)
nurin123 DooM .rpl (177.0 KB, 12 views)
nurin123 water.rpl (126.8 KB, 6 views)
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mm, sweet.

def- i didnt like the kick very much, it was a little snappy, but still good.

DooM- amazing DMs, but that head bruise, man. naw.

lonly- super twitchy stiff, but dm was k


water- very nice. most fluid probs, but the DMs were a bit strange.

all in all you're pretty good
replays pls cnc me
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New replay
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nurin123 paranormal.rpl (88.3 KB, 9 views)
Last edited by Zoey; Dec 30, 2014 at 09:06 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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nice splitcap.

again, the first kick was a bit snappy, it looks better if it fully extends or at least relaxes.

the decap was a bit weird, but it worked. woulda looked better if your foot kicked through uke's neck. keep em comin man, and pls cnc me
replays pls cnc me
so here is a new boomhit
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i add some stuff i made enjoy
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nurin123 deep.rpl (160.1 KB, 6 views)
nurin123 climber.rpl (121.1 KB, 5 views)
nurin123 deep.rpl (160.1 KB, 4 views)
Last edited by Zoey; Dec 31, 2014 at 01:49 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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