How does it looks like? for a wip of course.
I'd like some cnc, without random comments.



Music: Evilware - Misery
Source: Premiere Pro CC 2018

Looks really great for a wip so far indeed, also those are some decent players! Have you thought of a name for the clan?

Hey im smart! :<
Looks pretty good, i suggest you zoom when they're fighting, like on 0:33, and maybe add different transitions between clips and make the screen shake a bit.

I think you should make the name of the players a bit bigger or put it somewhere else but not in the top left corner, and use a classic font on them. It would be easier to read the names, specially the long one at 00:30, I can't really read the player name on the top left corner.

I suggest not trying to over complicate things, like your intro. I like the idea, I just feel it's too much... Also, your wording is a bit off.

All in all, for a wip, it's coming along nicely. You could look at this as an example

It's something I'm working on. Im trying to not over complicate things but still make it visually pleasing. Don't try so hard

sidenote: I play brawlhalla and would love to join you guys.