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Use less grabbing, try to spin around some. As stated above, you have no problems with getting dm's. Your problem is making them (and everything else) look good.
More practice mate!
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Like really, It's Everything Sweppie said.


Just practice more, Take a look often of what you're making.
See that Everything flows together and actually looks good.



Keep at it!
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you're getting a bit better,but you opener is too twitchy.
as well twitchy the movements,be a bit smoother.
a bit generic jump.
split looked normal.
but this decap was really nice.
skeet wold be better,you launched it in a strange way,try to make the grab not with the wrist or the sides of the hand,but with the top of the hand.
end pose was ok i guess.
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Originally Posted by victortb View Post
you're getting a bit better,but you opener is too twitchy.
as well twitchy the movements,be a bit smoother.
a bit generic jump.
split looked normal.
but this decap was really nice.
skeet wold be better,you launched it in a strange way,try to make the grab not with the wrist or the sides of the hand,but with the top of the hand.
end pose was ok i guess.

Thanks!
Good with getting dms but you're incredibly stiff, especially the opener
Work on more relaxing and more and semi realistic movements.
It'd help you alot
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