Toribash
Good how you kept Uke up with that punch. Your movement was the best part probably, you kept your speed and there were no twitchy moments until the juggling, and I'll talk about it later.
The decap didn't look that well aimed, but it looked powerful so it's forgiveable.
The head juggling had some problems, you broke the flow at the beggining and your legs looked twitchy.
oh yeah
Heya, long time no see.

The opener was flashy looking, but I noticed that some parts of your body looked stiff as you moved through it. When lifting uke, your left leg kicking off the ground could've been a bit bent to look less stiff. Your arms were pretty stiff aswell. It was a pretty short and sweet manip, but I think you could've kept uke near you instead of pushing him away. The decap kick was pretty alright. Pose was decent aswell. You can do more, man! >:o
hi lumi how are you

opener could be better its sorta(?) generic and boring but its ok friend i know u rusty

the position at 280 is really good but like you should have kept it for longer
so you can get better launch

the boom is really nice

solid replay just needs more WD-40