Hey there, I created this thread n will add here what I'll draw
I cant restore access to the cloud with my pics, so I create a new thread n Ill draw another things again





Tell me what needs to be corrected n wheres my mistakes, thank you

first thing i notice is the discrepancies and strong contrast in between the outline illustration and the font... outline art is generally fairly light and clean to look at, adding such a complex, thick grungy font (also slightly blurry), kinda kills it...
I understand your idea of using a Gothic looking font since you use a Latin say (from the egg to the apples) but you might be able to make it more sharp looking and slim it down.

thanx, chikin, I'll try to add a different font
anyway, added head to consideration

what software are you using?

The logo thingy looks good. If you draw it the is improvement to be had.
The head is just plain crap. Design, mapping and resolution wise...