Character anims were funny, especially in the first cine where his legs spazzed out, and easy fix to this would to be make the cine, then sync the foot steps to the song.
Sync was p bad. looks like you just sped it up and dragged it on top of the beat, so next time use Velo(if u use sv) or time remap if you use aae.
Pan and crop was waaay to bubbly , like it was tooooo round, and seemed like it was on the beat and not the gunshots l0l
As far as I can tell the cinematic work was good, the clips were way too fast, could barely see the shots. You should've put more emphasis on the awp scoping in and such. CC was really bad. I also noticed some frame drops.
Not bad for your first, keep it up.