Originally Posted by
Instep
You should keep uke spinning in one direction, in the replay you accidentally bump into him stopping his rotation. And im also not a fan of self dm's for anything but a skeet, but thats just personal preference. Everything else is great.
Anyway, I have these 2. Magnolia Petals was done in -30 gravity
instep, those replays are great, I love your unique style when doing these kind of replays, it's very floaty, almost.
kirinoi is right, your speed is slow, but I think you make up for that by getting some pretty cool dm's. I think the slowness in your style compliments you, it feels like a self assured kind of purposely drawn out slowness. very nice replay with that splitcap, was that a little manip wth the torso I saw in there? only thing I didn't like was the beginning, the opener was unique, but not entirely practical and amazing looking. but hey, you're known to do some pretty unique stuff!
7/10 for Rube Goldberg only because I've seen your replays, and I know you can create even better ones than this :P
nice manip with magnolia petals, but I feel like you went too close to the ground, maybe try to get uke more up in the air, and that'll give you more time to do something fancy
7/10 for manipulation
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Originally Posted by
Kirinoi
just random tricks cuz i was bored and i have exams .-.
not bad, but I can easily tell you hacked the beginning so you wouldn't hit uke. next time maybe place yourself further away from uke so you don't hit him XD the tricks were pretty good, speed was nice, flow was nice, but the ending sucked. you had time to pose, and it would've looked 10 times better if you had posed.
7/10 for tricking. If you fix those two things, i'd rate a 9/10 for sure.
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omg finally finished this parkour, i'm not too happy about the ending, but I feel like this parkour turned out pretty well! cnc?
Last edited by Karbn; Jan 18, 2017 at 04:50 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
