you got the right idea when going for openers that gain momentum, you just gotta spend some more frames on it to make your movements more fluid and drawn out.
cutting your movements short and going for a grab turns into some stiff looking movement that doesn't look that good.

you did get the job done though good boomhit on the legs and you gotta avoid getting hit in the head as it makes your replay look a little messy. overall i give it 7.6/10 Joels
good job guy but could be more refined