Hello Replay Makers!

the opener had a lot of potential but for the most part it was very sloppy and not fluid try getting closer to uke b4 dismembering him

Work on your speed and balance more, Dming isnt an issue AS OF NOW.
I expect gr8 things from you, sir.

Wow! New replay makers! Always fun : 3

The replay was kinda slow, and the hits were a little off center. When you go to kick or punch, move into it. I made a demonstration to give.

Looks like all you need to work on is precision, speed and fluidity!

Alrighty. I'll work with this replay and try something else.


You have more faith in me then I do. This is good.

yeah, practice what CombatBot said. you need some fluidity in it. but good overall.

You don't even make replays :<

Anyways, I worked a bit on my speed here in this next replay. It's a simple split kick. I'll work on some combos tommorow. I'm done for tonight. I think I'll go play some quick TK to help.


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Edit: Took your advice combat. This helps me a great deal. I edited my first replay and here is what I got using your tip. Its nothing special, just a kick resembling yours.

Dayum! Those we're actually really good! Keep it up

Thanks man. I'll be working on it most of this weekend.

you're replay are pretty good for someone that is just starting, but I recommend you look at other replays from outstanding replay makers (largekilla - swexx) and try to incorporate what makes their replays so good. You want to avoid being stiff and it will look a lot better.