demondemo - soo uhh,opener was like really stiff,try relaxing a bit more and
using your knees,elbows, glutes and pecs more. don't like ghosting that much
movement switches while grabbing look bad imo. your hands and legs are either
extended or contracted the whole time. hold your neck it's really floppy
i also noticed when you lean for the kick you miss,and then try again
i think if you fail to do a kick you wanted try it again and again till you get
it,don't just leave it in the replay. bouncing off the floor to get momentum
doesn't look that sexy.
first dm was okay,second one was stroking it for too long. i think that dms are supposed to be fast yet powerful
hope you don't mind me being really critical about it,that's just my opinion
keep working and it'll pay off 100%