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i think you could have done alot more with this replay by some editing here and there.
i dont like the decap or the other dm rly, you coulda make some booms or something else that would make it better, again. Patience, the "e" is your best friend.
6.5/10
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I dislike this one. Not very entertaining, is this the best replay you can do?
I know you have the potential to make a better one.

4/10
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new replay.
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Not bad, but not much happening really. I think there could have been more grace and style.

It was an average replay. Try making more gracious replays in the future :v
★★★★★
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i see, could you or someone give it a rating? then ill post another better replay ive just made
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This was just an easy punch and a kick. Too little action. Try to get into position for more hits. If you could score another two hits this would be so much better, not because of the two more hits, but then it seems way faster.

I won't rate you in the form x/10, because I suck at that and the useful part of this comment is the above, so no need for a rating.

Well, come on with the new replay!
Thanks for the Avatar, MrAakash
ok here you go.
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The first thing I thought about this replay was "Unrealistic."

The replay was good, but if you added in realism in this gravity (-30) it'll be a lot better to enjoy.
What I mean by this is that many sambo replays I have seen that involves dismembering, they look as if they are struggling to get up as they go berserk on uke.

7/10
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thanks drag.im working on a replay and my own style.also people please do not be shy! i want to become a better replay maker!!
EDIT: just finished the replay, and it turned out better than a expected.c'mon bring on the comments and ill show u guys the replay
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