Oh boy. Well, first off, sentences should be a building block in your posts. You don't make too much sense if you just throw words on top of each other. The sad part is that I'm a foreigner, and this is your native tongue, not mine, yet I'm still the one telling you this.
If you show a sparkle of brain activity from now on, we'll consider accepting you.
If you show a sparkle of brain activity from now on, we'll consider accepting you.
ok sorry i see where i messed up in my application do you want me to re-post it with correct sentences?
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alright here is my redo.
Belt: 2nd Dan
Age: 15
Why would we want you::i am familiar /experienced with the concept of being active on the forums and contributing to the payment needed to pay the official clan title.
Tell us about yourself*:my name is real name is brad i play baseball and i live in North Carolina
Best mod: Aikido/Aikido BD
Referrals**: none
Bans, infractions: useless posts on the art/texture forum (x2) - 3 month ban for stealing and selling a set
Previous Clans: (not in order) Fyre, Hype, Ele, Lost, Pure, Legend
Reason for leaving them: Fyre: the clan was hardly ever in-game and so i left them - Hype: (same as Fyre) - Ele: got in argument with a couple of members and i left - Pure: i don't remember - Lost: inactivity (back then i was real caught up with school work and crap) - Legend: (same as Lost)
Special skills***: making single player replays
is this better?
Belt: 2nd Dan
Age: 15
Why would we want you::i am familiar /experienced with the concept of being active on the forums and contributing to the payment needed to pay the official clan title.
Tell us about yourself*:my name is real name is brad i play baseball and i live in North Carolina
Best mod: Aikido/Aikido BD
Referrals**: none
Bans, infractions: useless posts on the art/texture forum (x2) - 3 month ban for stealing and selling a set
Previous Clans: (not in order) Fyre, Hype, Ele, Lost, Pure, Legend
Reason for leaving them: Fyre: the clan was hardly ever in-game and so i left them - Hype: (same as Fyre) - Ele: got in argument with a couple of members and i left - Pure: i don't remember - Lost: inactivity (back then i was real caught up with school work and crap) - Legend: (same as Lost)
Special skills***: making single player replays
is this better?
[Uber]
Originally Posted by bradatron4
alright here is my redo.
Belt: 2nd Dan
Age: 15
Why would we want you::i am familiar /experienced with the concept of being active on the forums and contributing to the payment needed to pay the official clan title.
Tell us about yourself*:my name is real name is brad i play baseball and i live in North Carolina
Best mod: Aikido/Aikido BD
Referrals**: none
Bans, infractions: useless posts on the art/texture forum (x2) - 3 month ban for stealing and selling a set
Previous Clans: (not in order) Fyre, Hype, Ele, Lost, Pure, Legend
Reason for leaving them: Fyre: the clan was hardly ever in-game and so i left them - Hype: (same as Fyre) - Ele: got in argument with a couple of members and i left - Pure: i don't remember - Lost: inactivity (back then i was real caught up with school work and crap) - Legend: (same as Lost)
Special skills***: making single player replays
is this better?
Good grammar but no.
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