The opener: Pretty standard...ya know...it's a stop, drop and launch thingy. It was a wee bit stiff as well. Did the job though.
The hits: Solid and sweet. The split was fine. Your leg was quite stiff while you were kicking though which looked a bit odd. The lil' spin you've done as the transition to the decap was neat. I really liked the last 2 kicks. They connected really nicely.
The movement: Pretty standard. Bit stiff at times. The transition between the decap and the last 2 hits was really neat. You didn't seem to lose much momentum while dropping on the ground there which I liked. The spins were neat. All of them. Yep.
The pose: Bit stiffish during the transition and twitchy at the steps, but neat overall.
pretty fly opener
sick double knee too
slow follow-up, but that was a nice kick after, shame there's not a lot of dms though, had some potential. the rest of them were great
only nitpick was that weird crotch kick, good job