One more thing I've noticed, the pumps are pretty strong.
At 0:08 the camera is a bit too far imo.
Wonderful vid, rest I said on Skype.

I already posted on youtube but yeah all the basics are there but there isn't really anything new

all the freecam was disgusting, tori wasnt always in frame and it was constantly changing with shitty angles
why did you replay the same first replay twice
0:17-0:22 you shouldnt have included imo, pretty pointless
entire video was pretty bland, needed a neato shader or something like a shader switching like sly did which i dont ever see much of anymore
ended too abruptly, replay went super fast and the song was just like lol bye



blur like this is pretty pointless if youre just going to flash it for a sec
sync was there, hardly noticable and felt pretty generic, same with the entire atmosphere, boring "dark song dark shader" combo
thought speed was all over place, didnt like it

DO SOMETHING COOL

This made me want to punch a cat

I think you should experiment more

It was tad plain for me, but I liked the CC tbh. Freecam was meh but it was a pretty good edit.

PS: accept all cnc's thrown at you, you wont always get praises from people.