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Old Aug 11, 2017   #21
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it looked very choppy at some parts, but like oscar said the split kick was pretty neat

you should work on this one a bit more imo
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Old Aug 12, 2017   #22
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Maybe you should plan what you should do next more than struggling to hit Uke.
The DMs are cool, cap was nasty. unlikey
split was cool but could've been way faster, likey
lost hand -rep
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Old Aug 13, 2017   #23
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Thanks for the CNC's everyone! I appreciate it.

Mr(god)Jingles doesn't deserve to see my shitty replays. Seriously, didn't really expect someone as good as you here.

Oh no Fuck diuway is back

Here's another replay
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Old Aug 16, 2017   #24
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^buumping in my skiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnn
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Old Aug 17, 2017   #25
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Lemme be harsh with this one, since I'm a first.
Is that okay?
Yeah, okay.


Opener was very generic, not much to say about it. But you should really try improvising more.

Transition from and to the first hit was nothing special, too. The way you made your arm stiff greatly reduced your momentum, but that's not really where all of the momentum builds up but it serves a lead. And seeing how you didn't do much with the lead it didn't put you in a very good position to do your second hit.
Nothing you can't fix though, this can be fast if you moved your lower just right.

Second hit with the grab on it had put you in worse position than you had already, and I can think of a few possibilities why you did that. Don't do it anyway. Because you were afloat and didn't have enough momentum to be fast enough, it looked really bad.

Third made you hit your head, blame the one above. ^^
(You probably didn't notice though because you had a shitload of disgusting 3D items on.)

First DM was pretty slick although it didn't show much, but I like it anyway.
Grab with the same hand was pretty not-okay, you rushed your decap.


I suggest you spend more time in replaymaking even though I know you're not much of a fun of that, but if you actually want to somehow get better at doing it, you should.

Also, you seemed to have moved in a -30-ish manner, so why not make your next replay a -30 one?

4/10
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Old Aug 20, 2017   #26
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>tfw this thread got 1k views

anyways, Diuway was right... I'm legit better in -30 gravity.

I actually feel proud of this:
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Old Aug 21, 2017   #27
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NICE

I see some improvements!

Opener startup generic af but that doesn't matter that much for now, what you did after that was really nice and I liked it until that part.

Struggle to manip, I saw it, but other than that you didn't make any messy contacts that would make this look worse.

overall i like this replay

opener and transitions were nice until 359
after that it was gay
split was pretty nice
decap with the same foot is gay

i actually like this one, but i think you can make it better with some edits/10
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Old Aug 21, 2017   #28
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gotem, If only I knew how to properly throw uke to the air lmao.

bumping for more
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Old Aug 23, 2017   #29
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^bumpo
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Old Aug 24, 2017   #30
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holy moly guacamole with extra cheese and pepperoni and a side of great bologna
this looks amazing

pretty nice opener, has great flow and originality to it
don't like how your foot touched the floor at ~353
amazing roll, adds so much to the replays
first kick up could have been a bit better, but i guess it helps for this replay
i love this type of manip so much, low to the ground kinda stuff
first DM was nice, though maybe you could have gotten lumbar or glutes with it?
decap was very nice, nothing bad to say about it
amazing pose + transition into it

you're a great replay maker, and you just gotta work on the small stuff
8.69/10
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