Dem shoulders: Concept was nice. Was expecting alot more from the opening axe kick thingermebob. You could have used alot more balance after that, since staying on the ground for the following dms looked alittle sloppy. Although the following dismember looked kinda bad for the previously mentioned reason, you managed to get some air which gave the illusion of balance for the next one or two, which looked better. Last dismember felt alittle too long after the ones beforehand, however only ever so slightly. Pose was meh, pretty good replay overall however.
Oh!: Split was really cool, and I like the way you pushed yourself into it. Also liked how quickly you spammed both your chunks in succession, looked nice. However, the skeets themeselves looked pretty week, and did not have much speed at all, try to devote more of your momentum into your throw, and make good use of your still connected hand, if you had grabbed the wrist and then flung it with your other, you likely could have gotten much more speed, quality over quantity. Replay was also lacking a decap, which was alittle dissapointing. The transition to the pose, as well as the pose itself, were alot better in this then the previous replay, and overall, I can say I liked the replay better then the other as well, nice job.