Original Post
trying poetry
euthanasia, a short poem
on wings of sand i fly
all the while, fading into a forgotten dream
on tears of night i choke
all the while, drowning in pure euthanasia
this hivemind has consumed me;
but i've never been so blissfully numb.
i'm breaking out.
desolate echo chamber.
pure euthanasia.
on wings of sand i fly
all the while, fading into a forgotten dream
on tears of night i choke
all the while, drowning in pure euthanasia
this hivemind has consumed me;
but i've never been so blissfully numb.
i'm breaking out.
desolate echo chamber.
pure euthanasia.
pretty cool poem, I was following it well until the hive mind part, unsure of what that means in this context or how it fits in with the whole image you're setting up/creating.
other than that. Kewl
other than that. Kewl
Howdy, I'm Mod Squad & The Social Media Manager @ Nabi Studios , if you have any modding or social media questions PM me or DM me on Discord: Matarika#5297
Senior Member
very creative, i would like to see more like this
i like your metaphors and choice of words
i like your metaphors and choice of words
Last edited by MrSofty; Jul 21, 2019 at 11:47 AM.
Na sahi kuch magar itna to kiya karte the
Wo mujhe dekh ke pehchan liya karte the
Wo mujhe dekh ke pehchan liya karte the
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»