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"The moment you fall is the moment I rise"~Mondaiji
That rhythem: I don't want to hurt your feelings or anything, but your walk sucked. The random movements (tricking?) later wasn't good as well. Improve on your movements as well.
Missing Link: You're too twitchy. You end up looking like you are spazzing out. Dm's weren't appealing either. Lrn2replay pl0x
Maxiumum mode: You simply got your tori and uke near each other then just made them rub against each other. The point of a spar (or a selfspar in this case) is to make a realistic looking fight. This is not seen in this replay.
Splinter2: Work on everything about it. From the opener, to your movements, up until your pose. Again, Lrn2replay pl0x
Jack the ripper: I've had enough. Just apply all the things I've mentioned earlier.
You still have long way to go.
Missing Link: You're too twitchy. You end up looking like you are spazzing out. Dm's weren't appealing either. Lrn2replay pl0x
Maxiumum mode: You simply got your tori and uke near each other then just made them rub against each other. The point of a spar (or a selfspar in this case) is to make a realistic looking fight. This is not seen in this replay.
Splinter2: Work on everything about it. From the opener, to your movements, up until your pose. Again, Lrn2replay pl0x
Jack the ripper: I've had enough. Just apply all the things I've mentioned earlier.
You still have long way to go.
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