Its looks pretty cool, but here are some things that bother me.
-The quality shifts way to much from the eyes being good and the clothing looking crappy. There is a little bit of shading on the clothing, but the outlines for
it are utter trash.
-There are four fingers instead of five, I know this can be the choice of the artist if he/she wants, but personally it bothers me. The feet are also pretty badly drawn.
-Fade your outlines into the rest of it a bit, as of now they are way to bold and stand out way to much. The pink details on it personally throw me off and I
don't care for them at all.
-Add some hair sticking out from under his hood at the sides of his face too, how it is like now just feels a bit strange. As if he would take off his hood and have long hair on the top of his head and almost no hair anywheres else.
-Clean up the lines on his necklace, there is no reason for those to be roughly drawn. To be honest there are a lot of lines you need to clean up, but thats the most important one.
Over all its pretty cool, loved how you did the potions/elixirs on his waist.