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Old Oct 16, 2009   #1
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Wrap around decap
This is the first replay I've ever submitted so any criticism is welcome. As you can see I've tried to make it look 'professional' but I would like to improve my replay making skills so any advice would be great. One last thing, I wasn't too fussed on the pose.
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[21:47]<B0sS>Alphonse: FUCK YOU AND YOUR SIG
[21:48]=-=Alphonse was booted from #clandoxa by YOU (B0sS)
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Old Oct 16, 2009   #2
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The decap is good, but the rest of the replay seemed a bit random. Also you grab with two hands. That is something you should avoid at all costs, because it looks ugly and it's not effective at all.
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Old Oct 16, 2009   #3
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Thanks, I took your advice and managed to come up with this:
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Old Oct 16, 2009   #4
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Better No grabbing, but stiff sometimes. anyway, this one is better that the first ;)
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Old Oct 16, 2009   #5
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Alright, I had a break from tb but when I started playing again I came up with this decap keeping the previous advice in mind.
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Old Oct 16, 2009   #6
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That was sweet, nice decap. Looked cool and was nice and quick.
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Old Oct 17, 2009   #7
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Another decap, and I have to say it took about 20 minutes to finalize the replay simply because I didn't think the landing was smooth. Anyway, let's see what you guy's think of it.
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