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Old Dec 12, 2017   #1
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I think I got better at detailing...
I just need your opinion on these sets... Please..

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- Krita (Free Version)
- Microsoft Paint (Windows)

What drawing equipment:

- A mouse...
- And Keyboard...

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Old Dec 13, 2017   #2
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The second one looks kind of detailed imo, I really like the colors there, kinda suited real well with the main color, and ya, you did a good job.
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Old Dec 13, 2017   #3
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What programs did you use to create your textures?

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Old Dec 18, 2017   #4
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for something made in ms paint the detail looks absolutely amazing

You definitely have untapped potential and I can't even fathom what you could create in something like Photoshop
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Old Dec 18, 2017   #5
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Thank you
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Old Dec 18, 2017   #6
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you need more variety with each set
you've used a total of maybe 4or5 different textures just placed in different orientations
i like the colors of the second one, but it's still too amateur in a lot of aspects
nothing unique or eye catching, other than the palette
don't talk to me or my dudes ever again
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Old Dec 18, 2017   #7
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idk why people say the 2nd one is better... imo its much worse.

the first one has great placement, and nice angles, and really works well together.

the second one seems clumsy, with odd, arrows on the head and a kinda shitty head overall, poor eye placement etc. also the legs have tons more detailing then anything else and all the details seem unnessecary, it seems over complex for almost 0 reason (I do this with my heads a lot actually, im trying to stop too) you need to have basic shapes that define it and either just shade/support them with other stuff, but dont just make 10000 parts

just imo
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Old Dec 19, 2017   #8
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Originally Posted by Veoo View Post
the second one seems clumsy, with odd, arrows on the head and a kinda shitty head overall, poor eye placement etc. also the legs have tons more detailing then anything else and all the details seem unnessecary, it seems over complex for almost 0 reason (I do this with my heads a lot actually, im trying to stop too) you need to have basic shapes that define it and either just shade/support them with other stuff, but dont just make 10000 parts

Going to agree with you on that

I think the most off putting thing is the head. If anything that's what throws me off the most
almost always in a war on what my set should be

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Old Dec 19, 2017   #9
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I will work on these weaknesses... I have actually learned a lot from these few posts... I actually use to do better sets than these... but I got a bit lazy... I admit.. Thank you guys for the weak points that I shall strengthen...

Again, thank you guys
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