You toribash editors make these too short
It's not very interesting to watch 10 second toribash clips all the time, make something longer like 0:40-1:30 or even more.
Twixtor was warping all over the place, that can be fixed by recording at a more lower timescale
Flow / Sync were good and it went well with the song
On to the shake,
The shake didn't make the edit more interesting.
It didn't feel like it was supposed to be there or was nessecary
Also when using shaky ALWAYS check edges for mirroring because it looks like u used it carelessly
As for CC,
The diffusion or whatever you used looked alright, some parts it bled out too much and the white on the Tori's matched with the background white
Transitions needed a lot of work, 0:14 looked like it stopped and it doesn't flow that great either.
I say you spend more time on editing and don't make them so short.
Make sure everything looks good before you render final. This one looks rushed
It's not very interesting to watch 10 second toribash clips all the time, make something longer like 0:40-1:30 or even more.
Twixtor was warping all over the place, that can be fixed by recording at a more lower timescale
Flow / Sync were good and it went well with the song
On to the shake,
The shake didn't make the edit more interesting.
It didn't feel like it was supposed to be there or was nessecary
Also when using shaky ALWAYS check edges for mirroring because it looks like u used it carelessly
As for CC,
The diffusion or whatever you used looked alright, some parts it bled out too much and the white on the Tori's matched with the background white
Transitions needed a lot of work, 0:14 looked like it stopped and it doesn't flow that great either.
I say you spend more time on editing and don't make them so short.
Make sure everything looks good before you render final. This one looks rushed
Last edited by data; Aug 11, 2016 at 03:04 PM.
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being persistent and not rushing things is hard for me as i dont have alot of inspiration these days.
most of these pointers helped me loads so thank you for the stuff
most of these pointers helped me loads so thank you for the stuff
Ep is ded strop tryna revive it you nerds
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