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Apr 6, 2014 Old
Votes and Help for my Clan-Page
Hey there
Registered a clan few days ago..
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=451431

please vote
-> style
-> infos
-> grammar

some ideas to make it better?
helping hands are welcome
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Apr 6, 2014 Old
Its decent , i'll give 8/10 for it.
Center tag is not working.
You should make an irc.
Ok close this now
:D
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Apr 6, 2014 Old
Style

It is kind of bland, and I really don't like these: http://img5.fotos-hochladen.net/uplo...aq1f3vlbw9.jpg
First banner is ok. 3/10

Info
Everything is good, your goals are well defined, 8/10 (although "stay thirsty" annoys me.)

Grammar
Only a few grammatical errors, but having your story centered isn't pleasing to the eye. 6/10

Overall
Better than most, and only needs slight revising. 6/10
my clan was deleted
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Apr 7, 2014 Old
<< Gramar junkie

It all started from one simple warrior. He was a strong fighter but also an orphan.
Nobody accepted him. No one gave him a chance to prove himself.
No one listened to his cries.

Suggest the tripple dot technique. (...) Where ever you feel fit.

Start: ..._____

Middle: ...____...

End: ____...


Goddess

goddess*


wisdom

Make it stand out and be particularly awesome.


It's pretty solid. I suggest you might want to make the titles, clan thread, recruitment thread, etc etc..., a bit bigger. Maybe use a differnt font.

Overall, I give it an 8/10. Good job.
Chickster: I literally don't know why I did it.
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Apr 7, 2014 Old
Well thats great.. thx for inputs.
All of you.
More votes and inputs still welcome..
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