Hi guys this is my next set beginning. I used Gimp2 and id like your criticism and advice, tips, hate and all that so i can become better.

Looks a nice draw, but the mapping is a bit off, I think.
Got the globe or ingame version?

Raiken is correct, bottom part of mouth will barely be visible. Eyes are on good spot, a bit too far away from each other though, and whole face is maybe a tad too wide, specifically mouth looks wide-ish. Top of the ears(?) will also be distorted.

Good job with the sketch though, looks interesting. I'll be waiting for updates.

i tried it on and you guys are right it needs to move up and in a bit thanks for the input. ill post the update as soon as i get to a good point with it

you just drew a face, but you didn't draw a texture

heres a mapping thing for where the neck is

lol...

Here, use this one:

I think you should lift the face up a bit, don't want it to look unadjusted.

i scrapped the idea. i got it all adjusted and all but it looked like hell on my tori:P ill upload what i did instead once i get back to my laptop

It looks like kyubi from naruto i think