people playing: 85, servers online: 29, games played: 145,013,556 Top Player: Gentleman

  Toribash Community » Toribash » Replays
Register FAQ General Rules Community
Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old Jun 2, 2018   #1
Rose
 
bruh Belt
Join Date: Sep 2013
Posts: 4,954
Clan: win



Rose replays =]
hi i occasionally do replays, i want u guys to help me improve : )

ignore the names btw im lazy when it comes to replay names
Attached Files
File Type: rpl homosexual brown skin colored.rpl (75.0 KB, 30 views)
pm me your questions or applications


send me pics of japanese girls
Rose is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jun 2, 2018   #2
-max
 
3st Dan Purple Belt
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 1,001



I really liked the opener, very creative and on the toes ;) you almost has the same style as me which i love about you ;) <3
you're quick to the point with the dms and the spin was pretty neat :o
The dms were cool but i feel like you possibly changed the dismemberthreshhold just a tad ;)

all you have to work on is obviously making longer replays (which you most likely have by now or will)
work on the DMs you get, maybe try to get more of them if you could
the pose was fine, i personally think that the pose doesn't have to be focused on too much in madmans too much, if the tori is in a reasonably decent position then i rate it
max is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jun 2, 2018   #3
Rose
 
bruh Belt
Join Date: Sep 2013
Posts: 4,954
Clan: win



thank you for the quick response! here's something i did with natejas a few weeks ago
Attached Files
File Type: rpl ethiopian_princess_creditcard_scams.rpl (231.0 KB, 14 views)
pm me your questions or applications


send me pics of japanese girls
Rose is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jun 2, 2018   #4
Cuci
Member
 
Brown Belt
Join Date: Jun 2018
Posts: 53



Hi, i didn't know you made replays but hey it seems you are off to a really good start my dude.
I noticed the frames were a bit, demented none the less.

So first off i'm gonna comment on this opener, it looks like a generic mushu launch opener at first glance, but then you used it pretty well to launch yourself to uke in 'not' a generic style, pretty neat i can say and the other thing is this replay is in -30 gravity so i respect that because its not my comfort zone of a gravity.

Now the next thing is you extended your neck so suddenly, i didn't like how it looks, maybe if you relaxed it a little i'll be happy with it but the you went this kick which was quite unnecessary but i can see why you do it, and then you lift uke up with a pretty good lift but you bruised your head which did a major tole to the replay.

Your transitions are a bit choppy but the dismemberments covered it, the first boom was real nice, i dig it. But then the second was underwhelming since you didn't get a boom, you could've tried harder but i would careless, and again you change your momentum which is only doing you bad.

So overall dismemberments were great you just need to work on your flow and movements, but since this is -30 gravity i respect your dedication to make a replay this good.

I'll give it 8.4/10
We need to collaborate ok thank you!
Cuci is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jun 2, 2018   #5
Rose
 
bruh Belt
Join Date: Sep 2013
Posts: 4,954
Clan: win



thank you! here's a replay i made a few weeks ago too, just getting back into replay making rn i guess
Attached Files
File Type: rpl joel_have_a_biggerest_gay.rpl (87.4 KB, 11 views)
pm me your questions or applications


send me pics of japanese girls
Rose is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jun 3, 2018   #6
iris
Member
 
10th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Jun 2017
Posts: 143
Clan: Nausea



didnt really like the opener, i think it was slow, i really like the punch u do on uke's leg, it looks so strong, allthough your form could be better (by left bending your lumbar as an example), the knee spin was cool and you just knee dmd by knee hitting a knee, ok then,, split kick and decap kick were pretty cool and pretty fast, pose couldve been a lot better
7/10
lisa is p cool
iris is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Jun 3, 2018   #7
Rose
 
bruh Belt
Join Date: Sep 2013
Posts: 4,954
Clan: win



thank you so much! i'll keep that into account

here's the first replay i did when i started doing replays, i know its kinda bad but i like it, what do you guys think of it?
Attached Files
File Type: rpl poop_face_butt_fart.rpl (223.4 KB, 7 views)
pm me your questions or applications


send me pics of japanese girls
Rose is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Dec 12, 2018   #8
Rose
 
bruh Belt
Join Date: Sep 2013
Posts: 4,954
Clan: win



did a thing
Attached Files
File Type: rpl ok so basically.rpl (157.5 KB, 8 views)
pm me your questions or applications


send me pics of japanese girls
Rose is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Dec 13, 2018   #9
sSLight
 
3rd Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Jun 2014
Posts: 2,099
Clan: Liquor



there was a bit of a weird delay from the hand touching the ground to the launch in your opener, i also felt that launch could be more forceful if you didn't extend the right pec but nonetheless it gave you a good position to act on

the lift was ok but a bit too high, it seemed to give you a hard time on what to do next, the weird tap you did later on didn't really serve any purpose, it was also a bit twitchy

i like the speed of the decap

there was a bit of ghosting when you were dming the hip, i also felt like you could have placed the grab better

good work, just needs a little bit of flow and remove the twitching
the universe is gonna catch you
Replays | ORMO | Liquor
sSLight is online now   Reply With Quote
Old Dec 13, 2018   #10
Rose
 
bruh Belt
Join Date: Sep 2013
Posts: 4,954
Clan: win



yeah, ok thank u ^_^ gonna do another replay sometime
pm me your questions or applications


send me pics of japanese girls
Rose is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT +1. The time now is 06:04 AM.




Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2019, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
ragdoll fighting game physics fighting game ragdoll fighting physics funmotion joints martial arts karate pc mac free game turn based game