Sup by james cat dude
It:
The opener was way to long, you took half of the replay just to get the first boom. At the opener when you start doing that spin thingy, you contract and relax the right knee a lot, which looks very strage. When you finished doing the spin, I personally think that, relaxing the right knee would look more fluid, but it's ok, not big deal.
After doing the spin, your right arm was up, which doesn't matter, but the thing is that after you do that you should relax or down the arm, so not to look so stiff.
The first boom wasn't bad, but I would preffer you to get the decap too because at the end of the replay we can see that the head is still intact, which I personally don't like.
The second boomhit was ok.
The last boomhit was the best of the three. Just after you've done that hit, your right leg looks kinda weird.
I like the spin you do before pose, looks really cool.
Pose♥
Good job!
It:
The opener was way to long, you took half of the replay just to get the first boom. At the opener when you start doing that spin thingy, you contract and relax the right knee a lot, which looks very strage. When you finished doing the spin, I personally think that, relaxing the right knee would look more fluid, but it's ok, not big deal.
After doing the spin, your right arm was up, which doesn't matter, but the thing is that after you do that you should relax or down the arm, so not to look so stiff.
The first boom wasn't bad, but I would preffer you to get the decap too because at the end of the replay we can see that the head is still intact, which I personally don't like.
The second boomhit was ok.
The last boomhit was the best of the three. Just after you've done that hit, your right leg looks kinda weird.
I like the spin you do before pose, looks really cool.
Pose♥
Good job!
Last edited by nicoolasw; Mar 23, 2015 at 03:43 PM.
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Originally Posted by nicoolasw
Sup by james cat dude
It:
The opener was way to long, you took half of the replay just to get the first boom. At the opener when you start doing that spin thingy, you contract and relax the right knee a lot, which looks very strage. When you finished doing the spin, I personally think that, relaxing the right knee would look more fluid, but it's ok, not big deal.
After doing the spin, your right arm was up, which doesn't matter, but the thing is that after you do that you should relax or down the arm, so not to look so stiff.
The first boom wasn't bad, but I would preffer you to get the decap too because at the end of the replay we can see that the head is still intact, which I personally don't like.
The second boomhit was ok.
The last boomhit was the best of the three. Just after you've done that hit, your right leg looks kinda weird.
I like the spin you do before pose, looks really cool.
Pose♥
Good job!
Thanks Nicool i wish i could of grabbed him alot higher but i tried and i couldn't reach
but i'm glad you liked the replay also i really should note that when trying to spinHere's a new replay:
Last edited by bgjames1; Mar 23, 2015 at 08:57 PM.
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