But you could work on the spins,Not to sure about the opener it is a little odd but who am i to judge xD,Good shit bro!.

Well, its actually a pretty good replay. The only things I have to say are in your first spin/punch, it would have looked much better if the elbow had been relaxed. The other thing I have to say is that after your third landing/cork, when you suddenly extended your wrist, it was very noticeable, even while looking a the Tori's back. Other than these things, it was a great replay. Better than I could hope to do. I am in love XD

Pretty sure he told me this was from a year ago,It's a nice replay but i'd love to see what he can do now,Draku is pretty skilled,Draku you should try to do some manip and boom hits :3,I think everyone would like to see that lol,Especially from you to start off with.

really nice, spins are good but one thing you really need to work on is your speed

opener is good
acually you could do a cork or something from that set up you got there
dont hold your knee just let it go as a kick
last trick has a wierd set up but the trick itself looked pretty good
need more speed tho

Bigdog was close but no cigar. I had just made that replay the other day, but prior to it I had been pretty rusty. Still am too, I can't get anything more out of this replay tonight. (Not going to force it.) Thought I'd leave you off with the opener I came up with though. It was pretty random, and it's not your typical opener but I think I can work with it.

I was thinking of grabbing ukes hand when mine makes contact with his to pull me closer to uke for the delivery. Also, seeing as how two separate people noted I need to speed it up I'll work on it. Thanks for the feedback.

Really hate that opener,It's been used way to much,Wasn't bad other then that in my eyes,Good speed and such.

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Still haven't made anything out of that opener, but here's a new one. I feel I've improved.