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[Vid] Young Tears (A Toribash Edit)
I rushed with that one so I didn't expect the result to be my personal best, But it turned out to be just fine.
I'm a bit rusty so the more edits I will release the more I will get back to myself and make better and better edits through the time.
Any feedback will be appreciated!
Cheers
I'm a bit rusty so the more edits I will release the more I will get back to myself and make better and better edits through the time.
Any feedback will be appreciated!
Cheers
Wow, so much improvement since your last one! You clearly have loads of potential. The sync was perfect, well done on that.
One thing I would say though is that you don't have to use flashes on every beat - there are other ways to sync it up. The slow-motion part was pretty laggy too. If the slow-mos were smooth in this then it would be very good
One thing I would say though is that you don't have to use flashes on every beat - there are other ways to sync it up. The slow-motion part was pretty laggy too. If the slow-mos were smooth in this then it would be very good
one time i had a hair deep in my urethra and when i pulled it out it felt kinda good ~fudgiebalz 2020
<~Skul> they're not children, they're demon midgets
<~Skul> if you kill one in front of the rest, they'll scatter and leave
Pretty sure the "laggy slow-mo" is on purpose, it suits the style of the song and I enjoyed that.
Only thing I disliked was the sound effects for the kicks were too loud and they don't really match the song imo
Only thing I disliked was the sound effects for the kicks were too loud and they don't really match the song imo
Originally Posted by Holotor
Pretty sure the "laggy slow-mo" is on purpose, it suits the style of the song and I enjoyed that.
the fuck are you talking about, hopefully it wasnt on purpose because it would have been a bad decision, it looks terrible and hurts my head
are you recording at 60fps?
what program are you using
the sounds didnt fit at all, kind of brought me out of the video. too loud and didnt go with the song well at all
this entire thing looks cheesy and uninteresting, i could see that you did what you could with only 2 replays in only 36 seconds, but it felt too stretched out with nothing much happening besides some sync, some flashing, and some hit sounds
although some might disagree, these are default replays and i would have enjoyed it more if it was something i havent already seen before a million times in toribash edits
same goes for the song choice, i dont know if its specifically in toribash edits or in any kind of edit at all, it feels like its everywhere
nothing really new, try to do something different
doesnt look unique to me