Ouch. What happened to the fluidity? That's most of what makes a replay. Also you seemed sort of too quick to do something.

Just work on patience and fluidity ;)

I rushed on this replay, thanks for the tips.

-playing music pieces :
1. know the notes
2. play it with emotion

playing toribash :
1. know the moves
2. perform the moves fluid

Thanks Bink, new replay, not that good.

Aside from the fact that your wrists were contracted for almost the entire replay, the decap could have been placed better, but comparing from your previous replay, it was more fluid.

Overall a pretty nice replay to be honest (remember the wrists thingy)

Thanks backstab CnC is appreciated. I will be working on fluidity and dms.

New replay, couldn't get the decap, but I got a sorta boom hit
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Edit of No Decap

Took a break of replay making, so i have these tricking attempts, please CnC but don't judge too hard because the only tricking training iv'e gotten is watching youtube videos. Also with the v2 i ran outa frames and relaxed all.

Everything is a little too choppy, and the moves looked too force. When you trick, it has to glide into motion.