Opener was alright in my opinion, but straight arms going down looks so weird to me.
You should probably get lower if you are going to do a spin like that, you didn't get much out of it.
Transition to the kick was rather nice though.
Not sure why you ungrabbed, but the kick and head punch thing were alright could be better. (but its hard since you ungrabbed after all)
jump was really cool, but make sure your arms aren't so stiff. You actually lose a lot of momentum from stuff joints let alone 2. The kick was ok, but was hoping you'd knick the torso and get a dm from there as well, but alas it was not the case.
pose was okey
decent replay imo, gj.