Ranking
Down the line: The opener was great, but it's a bit overused IMO.
I loved how your foot went right through Uke, I find that hard to accomplish at speeds lower than 50.
Liked the split, flowed well with the wrist DM.
The crotch punch + kick combo was awesome, crotch booms always look more destructive than chest booms.

Look both ways: The opener was kinda twitchy, but the 3 DM boom made up for it. I had made a similiar boomhit in another replay I was working on, but I found it impossible to keep the DMs and not break my foot, so kudos to you.
The pec and decap looked very nice, I like how you flow your hits.
Not as destructive as ever, but still a good replay.
oh yeah
Sleepless:
Starting run was good but it can be improved,
First flip and boom was really good, and the combo there was just...sexy.
The kick afterwards was fine and wtf another combo...
But that punch made you lose all your flow and balance,
You just fell and took some time to get up, that was bad.
Pose was nice, balanced and cool.

Academy:
While running, your pec timing is really important, try to use your glutes and pec to keep running straight. Using shoulders are mostly bad while running, because it makes you lose your balance. Try not using the chest too, looks kinda weird and unrealistic.
And while running, keep your ankles contracted to lean forward.
Hope I helped.
Academy: You extended your left hip too early at the start, and it affected the whole run.
I like the flip at the end though, it looked very nice.

Sleepless: The starting kick had no impact on Uke whatsoever, but the dms were awesome.
The chest kick flowed well, it was very cool.
The crotch combo was awesome, but you struggled to get up, or so it seems.
oh yeah
Originally Posted by chamara View Post
Academy:
While running, your pec timing is really important, try to use your glutes and pec to keep running straight. Using shoulders are mostly bad while running, because it makes you lose your balance. Try not using the chest too, looks kinda weird and unrealistic.
And while running, keep your ankles contracted to lean forward.
Hope I helped.

You did, quite a lot actually.
Thanks.

Originally Posted by pusga View Post
The crotch combo was awesome, but you struggled to get up, or so it seems.

I kinda did that on purpose.


Anyways, the following replays are as follows: an edit for Sleepless and a parkour replay. That was my first parkour replay so I would really like some criticism on that.

EDIT: Added the mod
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Well Rested.rpl (310.2 KB, 58 views)
Runner's High.rpl (273.5 KB, 53 views)
Academy-Lvl_5v2.tbm (1.3 KB, 40 views)
Last edited by sprytryne; Aug 10, 2012 at 03:03 PM.
Well rested: I liked the new skeet, it was a cool addition to the replay. Way better than the other one now that you fixed some things at the end.

Runner's High: I'm afraid I don't have the mod for that replay.
oh yeah