its good but hayabusa backflip is still better.
no

yes

no

and no

Can you please elaborate on what I did wrong and I can try to fix it?

alright lets start off:
the kip up starting was just extending knees and letting everything else at the same position wish is completely unrealistic and anyone can do
for the rest i didn't like the arms thing
doing it without raising and lowering arms would be more realistic coz irl you dont drag your self back using your arms to kip up.

for the crowd awakener it would be better if you did a spinny thing to set the jump.
anyways i didn't like the right shoulder holding and right elbow relaxing on the opener
they made it look rusty af
to raise your self up you did a superman thing instead of raising both of your arms
your legs also looked so rusty. they would look ok if you contracted your knees earlyer.
the landing was meh
try to land on your feets.
overall you need to work on the smoothness of your moves,flow,transations and landings

Alright, thanks.

What did I do wrong?

Opener is stiffer than my dick during tentacle porn


launch was twitchy

flip was stiff

landing was stiff

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IM BACK MOTHERFUCKERSSSS WOOOOOHOOO
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also

http://www.club540.com/tricktionary/double-full-hyper
^ new link for the hyper full double thingy
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http://www.club540.com/tricktionary/hyper-aerial-mega
Hyper aerial is missing the mega part

This? I have a dream to replace hayabusa, not that I care about this I just need to replace his trick. xP

@Move

I would say no, tbh.

At frames 325-to 250 or so was really stiff
when you lowered your arms, it was a little jerky.

one more try at btwist hyper

While that trick is pretty well made, I don't feel like it really fits in here realism wise.
You stay too close to the ground, almost doing splits at points.
I'd say no. Try to work on realistic movement.