need help with this one.
first time changing my style. so im not big on detail.
what do you think i should add

some updates.

So far it's awesome. Maybe hide the ear, and change the mouth, or even cover it up with a mouth plate or something. Keep the flow like that, and follow that style all the way back to the back of the head. Also the colors on the left side of the head, kinda look a bit out of place.

updated/.

It's looking good. fix the cords at the back, like cover them up a bit, and those too big circles, look a bit to close together at the back. Liking the hair a lot though.

the finished version is in the art threads. cvheck it out

Its not bad but the general placement of everything seems to be all over the place. The viser issn't symetrical so it looks kinda sloppy, and the thing that annoys me most is the mouth is just straight. Your usually pretty good with open mouths i'd try that. Overall pretty nice yer but a few touches needed.