are you trying to copy DarkJak's drake?

That ^

was the first what i thought to :P

No, I admit that this got inspired by it tho.

I like the shading on the metal, but the eyes need more work, some highlights and touch ups.

well it has almost exactly the same layout atm. xept you dont have the epic side bars
i see more "redrawing drake" than "drake inspiration"

While the shading may be the same I think that the layout is completely different. Also I do have my own ideas for shapes to add, you can justice when the texture is done.

Wasn't my first thought, although I see the similarities.
It reminds me of an aardvark. Like the two ears on the corners of the eyes :]


You could try adding shadows in the eyes. Some glare perhaps since eyes aren't completely dry unless you are dead.

The layout is pretty similar but it's kinda generic. Like eyes, border around eyes. And a mouthpiece.
http://i646.photobucket.com/albums/u...akTB/draco.png
Shading is pretty different though. Both metal looking but different metals.

Also, congrats on getting official! Didn't notice this group until today

Nice use of the shapes in the newest update. This could turn out quite well but the shine in the eyes are mirrored so the lighting is off already. Try not to make this too symmetrical.
The shading style is nice but 'flat' shaded, as the light source is not defined. This causes some confusion at first, so try and fix the lighting, if you can, to straight down. Mainly on the new additions.