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Old Feb 20, 2018   #1
D3571NY
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Hey there, I created this thread n will add here what I'll draw
I cant restore access to the cloud with my pics, so I create a new thread n Ill draw another things again


ab ovo usque ad mala



c/ped head "black flag"


Tell me what needs to be corrected n wheres my mistakes, thank you
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Old Feb 20, 2018   #2
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first thing i notice is the discrepancies and strong contrast in between the outline illustration and the font... outline art is generally fairly light and clean to look at, adding such a complex, thick grungy font (also slightly blurry), kinda kills it...
I understand your idea of using a Gothic looking font since you use a Latin say (from the egg to the apples) but you might be able to make it more sharp looking and slim it down.
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Old Feb 20, 2018   #3
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thanx, chikin, I'll try to add a different font
anyway, added head to consideration
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Old Feb 21, 2018   #4
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what software are you using?
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Old Feb 21, 2018   #5
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The logo thingy looks good. If you draw it the is improvement to be had.
The head is just plain crap. Design, mapping and resolution wise...
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