Like the editing a lot, you have some good transitions and appropriate effects
What worries me a little is the general vibe, it's pretty dark and edgy, which is fine for Oblivion and Nightin I suppose but I don't think it suits the clan as a whole. We are a happy bunch and it's a little too serious for us I feel
I also personally like the song but I know for sure other members don't and again I think it's possibly a bit too dark for us
Good stuff though, I really like the editing
As a general tip for everyone competing I'd recommend just picking a song from the thread if you want to make it easier for you