Toribash
Original Post
Feedback on my custom run
Hey, I had a pretty clumsy custom run a few months back, and have since made it a bit smoother. I was wondering if any of you could give me some advice on improving it, making it more fluid, and keeping my balance better than I already do. also, i was kinda rushed while making this, i did it in maybe 5 minutes, but if i put quality time into it, I could keep my balance much longer. the replay called Custom run was one i put time into, so i could stay running. just imagine the updated one going for as long as the normal one does. but anyway here it is:

btw any feedback would be appreciated
also, both replays are about 3000 distance from uke, and 10 turnframes, no shift spaces
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Updated custom run.rpl (134.3 KB, 28 views)
Custom run.rpl (189.7 KB, 13 views)
Uhhh, actually, if you really want to custom run, just run. No random flips and shit
Heart of Gold
Nice job! just work on it a little more so you can keep your balance and not look like your falling and make sure your moving your arms good too, they help with balance.
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Also, i'd make sure i don't rotate my chest.
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Heres mine
Attached Files
For this guy..rpl (111.7 KB, 15 views)
Last edited by Alterations; Oct 31, 2014 at 10:07 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump