I think the track is quite enjoyable and even if it is somewhat repetitive overall, there's still some kind of variation.
And personally, if I really like a part of a song, I wouldn't really mind if that part goes on for 10 minutes without anything changing.
One thing you can do about the song being to repetitive is to remove some of the loops at a few parts, like for a breakdown and stuff like that.
Also, about the other stuff you've mentioned:
I think the most important thing in music production is to have fun making music and also to make the music for yourself. And for this, it shouldn't really matter how you make your music.
(Obviously, once you're showcasing your song in a forum, for example, you'll encounter people telling you that it's a bit hard to give CnC on something that was made purely out of loops, since that's indeed quite difficult, especially if you're used to making everything or most of your stuff from scratch.)
Back in 2005 I got MAGIX's Music Maker 2006 and I had a lot of fun working with it, however it also always felt a bit limited, it had a few synths, sure, but it was rather made for putting loops together. And with loops, you'll never have the same amount of control over what you're creating than if you were using a less loop based approach.
I mean, Music Maker gives you a huge array of loops, if you find something you like, you can chose between a few different pitches, and that's it. Beside of that, you don't really have control about the melody or the mood of your song, you can only use things others made. And that's pretty much the reason why I've switched to a demo of Fruity Loops after like a year of using Music Maker, since that one offered more tools for actually creating sounds yourself. And I think that's the important thing, if you feel like your current tools are limiting your creativity, it's probably time to switch to something more advanced, but until then working with whatever you have is fine as well.
Last edited by Pitch; Jul 29, 2015 at 11:16 PM.