As Baby said, your stiff a lot of the time. Opener was stiff, first kick didn't look realistic, it barely skimmed the head, then after that you did a punch thingy. It looked kindve weird and didn't flow. at around frame 515, I saw you grab then ungrab in the time frame of like 5 frames which was a little bit ugly to the eye.
Basically, work on your flow. Your still better then me but I'm still able to CnC.
CnC my thread now, please I'm a CnC deprived newbie replay maker.