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Trying out a new style what do you think, this was originally for dup for him to see what I could do.

Sunny Vegans 13






http://i.gyazo.com/d80cb86cb138c0c8e76edc7234b7a70f.mp4
shh


Last edited by objects; May 7, 2015 at 02:18 AM.
[3:42:15 PM] Velair: i wanna fuck tyzi[3:42:17 PM] Velair: if its a girl[3:42:19 PM] Velair: possible
too short but its oce so what to expect.

well the beginning was pretty cool and stuff but there was not enough of pink
then the pink came and i was happy 10 out of 3
ok
ok
i didnt like the white flash at 0:04
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whoops at the start i mean
Last edited by Fr4me; May 7, 2015 at 07:40 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Pls no more under 5 second edits here :/

Your velo was pretty cool,
the flash at the beginning was way too intense,
the dsr gun sound was way too intense to be used in such a chill part of a song,
you should add some p/c at the end of the clip and in the beginning of the death cine to compensate the transition,
the black bars were pretty cool,

Not much more to say about this.
Make it longer; you could have at least made it 10 seconds.
Nice sync
The flash at 0:0000001 was weird, mostly because it was inverted colours. perhaps if you used some mlb to make it something more eyecandyish i'd be better.
Gun sounds weren't a problem for me, but eh.
Nice bars.
I wish you would have made it zoom in on the dead guy longer at :03 but too late for that.
RSMB next time pls
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJEHeLiDoio he asked to dual so i asked him to do a small prev with the song so i could see what he could do

anyway, im sure with rsmb and a better cc it'd look better but the velo's ok pancrop is fine i guess but the cinematic and the velo on it was bad
the invert should be at the beginning of the scar reload.
but dope, if this is a dual im actually looking forward 2 it
damn im gettin old