well.. I'm sorry, but I have to be Honest with you
1. the first clip that you showed is a tori tricking, theres a bit lagging in there and its kinda boring dont you think? tell me if you think its not, I'll suggest that you should make the video more faster because the song is not really match up if its to slow, or maybe you can change the song
2. for me, the first clip kinda too bright and some other clip too
3. The trail.. for me the trail is kinda annoying
4. try to improve your camera movement, but overall is good
thats all, overall the video was OK to me ;) keep the good work ;)