Toribash
It's a good thing to have a lot of dms in your replay, but you don't have to sacrifice movement just to get in more hits where they aren't really necessary. In the replay, it looks like you're struggling to get in as many hits as possible where you could be setting up for a more powerful and clean hit.

Something that I recommend to make sure you don't twitch is to relax all and see where your momentum is carrying you, so that you can be more consistent and avoid any abrupt changes in momentum by having a good idea of where you're moving.
Glimpsed
First one is a shitty manip attempt. At least, I made him move so that's progress. (lol)

Second one was just something I just did while listening to an audiobook. (y)
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Made him move anyway.rpl (77.6 KB, 13 views)
splitcap and something.rpl (142.7 KB, 16 views)
This one took a while, I gave up multiple times because I either couldn't hit or I just broke something while trying to set up. Finally landed all three but I had no idea how I could keep the flow or chain the third setup into the rest of it, so I didn't. Had enough trouble getting them all to hit anyway.

Second one was just a "Hey I did the hard thing now lets do simple thing" relaxing replay.

[20:34] <Icky> https://www.dropbox.com/s/zxs6orbyyz...tters.rpl?dl=0
[20:34] <Icky> https://www.dropbox.com/s/slseh3ma8l...20exe.rpl?dl=0

Dropbox links since uploader is broken or something. ^
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Press any key to break exe.rpl (168.4 KB, 26 views)
Last edited by Icky; Feb 26, 2016 at 08:46 AM.
press any key had a pretty nice opener but it seems you kinda rushed into the DM's rather than waiting for a better opportunity to begin. the hits were nicely spread out but there wasn't too much style in between them, try to fill the gaps with more than just what's needed to begin the next hit.

i got three had a really clean decap and neat transition into the first and seconds skeets, but the third seems rather tacked on. try not to show you're have trouble getting the skeets, you can see it was tough because you rotated and switched positions a few times before you threw the last one.

but gosh dang you're progressing really quickly, hopefully you'll be one of the golden few whom can get good really fast like internet and mused
Last edited by millie; Feb 26, 2016 at 09:02 AM.
I like the speed and that you're all over the place. Booms are there too and I like that lot. There's some unrefined movement here and there and a lot of moving back and forth which is not always a good thing. My favorite one is the opener challenge replay because I made the opener there's a lot of hits in a short period of time and lots of dms, I am a fan of that.
golf
Collab with glimpsed because fun times.

[07:37:13 AM] (Icky): rofl the leg dm
[07:37:26 AM] (Glimpsed): I'm the master of self dms ; )

Context was necessary for the second one
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Glicky.rpl (184.6 KB, 15 views)
second one has some random shitty set up. But I liked the kick so that is there.
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The Razzled Dazzler.rpl (154.7 KB, 28 views)
Prepare for impact.rpl (107.0 KB, 21 views)
i also forgot this exists

have a thing i finished after leaving it for a long time

EDIT: Turns out sassy and i did this as a collab a while ago but i found the unfinished version saved on my pc and redid it without knowing
http://i.imgur.com/0FiBT43.png
http://i.imgur.com/UG3d4jb.png

im dumb ok
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blahsey.rpl (196.3 KB, 23 views)
Last edited by Icky; Aug 13, 2017 at 05:26 PM.
Opener was great, lots of possibilities.
Great amount of destruction but it felt kind of robotic and too improvised, I didn't get a sense of flow really.
Keep up the replays and keep improving, pal!