ok ok
u got talent thats all good.
but
First STOP drawing on fking thin, lined, writing-good4nothingelse sheets !
Second do some composition sketching wt a pencil before inking the drawings.

just suggestions from my part, but if you follow them your gona be 10 times better in a moment!
love the rain, but the car is wht tells me youre a artist in the making(, just dont be over 18, if so youre to late blooming)

peace