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[VID] WIP Bullet Train
What do you tink?, i improve from the last one i made it?


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Originally Posted by AlphanowGD View Post
try to do mix the replays and make effets wen u hit

Thanks , I need to keep in mind for the next WIP
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Replays were way too slow for the song.
Try to sync more.
Pick better replays.
Please remove that black border man pls.
Color Correction could be improved greatly.
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Originally Posted by Chilledon View Post
Replays were way too slow for the song.
Try to sync more.
Pick better replays.
Please remove that black border man pls.
Color Correction could be improved greatly.

I Made a 3th WIP
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The end has improved, I like how you kept the flow going, keep it balanced like you did at the end.
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One thing I suggest is having the song and moves be somewhat in sync, the video seems like just a replay with music in the background. The zoom on his chest seemed a bit strange but that could just be me.
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Originally Posted by Lotramus View Post
The end has improved, I like how you kept the flow going, keep it balanced like you did at the end.

Thanks, but i need to improve alot

Originally Posted by Goat View Post
One thing I suggest is having the song and moves be somewhat in sync, the video seems like just a replay with music in the background. The zoom on his chest seemed a bit strange but that could just be me.

i keep in mind your suggest, i have in mind a replay show not a real video, anyways, Thanks for helped me with your opinion
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making replays look faster and using techno music will make it look cool.
accually i like the old style of editing try to make vid like joy of motion or the qemist.
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btw i liked the vid in the last 15sec
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Originally Posted by AlphanowGD View Post
accually i like the old style of editing try to make vid like joy of motion or the qemist.

i still dont think bad quality should be ok because of the "old style"

what program are you using

for a bullet train this video was hella slow, needs more speed

he said to remove the black border btw and you didnt but you should because its pretty bad
needs pan@crop

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